I think that you may want to add more shadowing over her eye with the her hair. I also see that some of her hair is flowing is it suppose to be a breeze? If so add more or maybe take it out. I couldn't really tell what it was showing? I love the texture on the lower part of the window. It seems like your trying to convey waiting over a long period of time. Her face seems blank maybe a bit more emotion if that is what she is meant to show. Over all I really love the picture.
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